The First 48
As I approach the crime scene I see a girl who is in shock. She is holding a grey box in her hands. The look on her her face makes me think someone died. I asked her what happened and this is the story she gave me.
It all started on her way to her match ceremony. She was with her bestfriend Xander and it was a pretty normal match ceremony. Naturally she was nervous because this ceremony would determine who she spent the rest of her life with. All the names were being called and when hers was finally called she stood up, but the screen remained black. This signified that her match was in the room. It was Xander, her bestfriend. She told me she was the happiest she could be.
The next day when she got home she wanted to look at Xander's microchip to find out more about him. She told me she didnt really need to look at it because she already new everything about him, but it was protocol so she did it anyway. There was only one problem, when she opened the box and inserted the card the face that came up was not Xander!It all started on her way to her match ceremony. She was with her bestfriend Xander and it was a pretty normal match ceremony. Naturally she was nervous because this ceremony would determine who she spent the rest of her life with. All the names were being called and when hers was finally called she stood up, but the screen remained black. This signified that her match was in the room. It was Xander, her bestfriend. She told me she was the happiest she could be.
I will continue to collect the facts and try to get to the bottom of this.
Sarah (Legend): y'all really made it seem like a police case great job
ReplyDeleteBlanca (The Maze Runner) i really liked this. It made me want to know what happens next y'all did a good job
ReplyDeleteChrissy (Matched): I really like how you did the case. It sounds like an actual police report. I love the background!
ReplyDeleteIrwin(Delirium) the side bar for the blog archive is very creative and cool. I also like the background, good job and keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteThis is much too simple for the criteria I asked of you. There is no creativity or pizazz. What happened here?
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